I often refer to blank verse in A Course in Miracles, i.e., 10 syllables per line, the rhythm,
slack STRESS, iambic, and I do not want to leave the impression that every line
is iambic because that would be weak and sing-songy.
Jesus, the Master Poet, uses the poetic metrics that have
come down through the centuries to vary the rhythm, so that He can posture our
voices to speak the lines as He intended, emphasizing certain words, sound
echoing sense.
For illustration I have selected the first stanza of Lesson
157, Into His Presence would I enter now, demonstrating the slack STRESS
pattern.
1.
THIS is a/ DAYof/ SI lence/ and of TRUST./
2.
It IS/ a SPE/ cial TIME/ of PROM/ ise IN/
3.
your CAL/ en DAR/ of DAYS./ It IS/ a TIME/
4.
HEAV en/ has SET/ a PART/ to SHINE/ up ON,/
5.
and CAST/ a TIME/ less LIGHT/ up ON/ this DAY,/
6.
when ECH/ oes OF/ e TERN/ i TY/ are HEARD./
7.
THIS DAY/ is HO/ ly, for IT/ USH ers in/
8.
a NEW/ ex PER/ i ENCE;/ a DIF/ ferent KIND/
9.
of FEEl/ ing
AND/ a WARE/ ness. YOU/ have SPENT/
10.long
DAYS/ and NIGHTS/ in CEL/ e BRAT/ ing DEATH./
11.to
DAY/ you LEARN/ to FEEL/ the JOY/ of LIFE./
As you can see, 8 of these lines are strictly iambic, slack STRESS: 2, 3, 5, 6, 8, 9, 10, and 11.
In Line 1, Jesus wants to emphasize this day and silence and trust, and
so he purposely broke the iambic pattern with:
/THIS is a/
/DAY of/
/and of TRUST/.
In Line 4, He wants to emphasize heaven:
/HEAV en/
In Line 7, He comes back to this holy day:
THIS DAY/
/ly, for IT/
/USH ers in/
/ly, for IT/
/USH ers in/
For a more
complete explanation of poetic metrics in the Course, please take a look at my
Preface to “The Rhythm and Reason of Reality:
Prose and Poetry in A Course in Miracles.” In His Course, Jesus shifts from prose to
poetry in the Text in Chapter 26, and in the Workbook, in Lesson 98.
http://www.amazon.com/Rhythm-Reason-Reality-Poetry-Miracles/dp/1890648914/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1402158265&sr=1-1&keywords=the+rhythm+and+reason+of+reality
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So, I am sitting on our couch in our Sun Room, looking
through the large windows on three sides, gazing at the dark green leaves on
the branches gently bowing in the slight breeze, and consciously breathe in and
breathe out, my feet firmly grounded on the floor, and slowly read aloud the
first stanza of today’s Lesson, 157, Into
His Presence would I enter now, the cadence of the blank verse matching the
beating of my heart, the tip of my finger on my carotid artery, each beat the
STRESS and the space in between, the slack:
when ECH/ oes OF/ e TERN/ i TY/ are HEARD/
This is a day of silence
and of trust.
It is a special time of
promise in
your calendar of days.
It is a time
Heaven has set apart to
shine upon,
and cast a timeless
light upon this day,
when echoes of eternity
are heard.
This day is holy, for it
ushers in
a new experience; a
different kind
of feeling and
awareness. You have spent
long days and nights in
celebrating death.
Today you learn to feel the joy of life.
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